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SAT Writing Practice Test

Section 2

 

Time — 10 Minutes

14 Questions

The following sentences test correctness and effectiveness of expression. Part of each sentence or the entire sentence is underlined; beneath each sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Choice A repeats the original phrasing; the other four choices are different. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice A; if not, select one of the other choices.

In making your selection, follow the requirements of standard written English; that is, pay attention to grammar, choice of words, sentence construction, and punctuation. Your selection should result in the most effective sentence--clear and precise, without awkwardness or ambiguity.

EXAMPLE: 

Laura Ingalls Wilder published her first book and she was sixty-five years old then.

(A) and she was sixty-five years old then
(B) when she was sixty-five
(C) at age sixty-five years old
(D) upon the reaching of sixty-five years
(E) at the time when she was sixty-five

1.  Many famous performers, from musicians to Hollywood actors and actresses, they grow up in very small towns.

(A) they grow up in
(B) they have grown up in
(C) which grew up in
(D) growing up in
(E) grew up in

2.  The new railroad cars to contain enough seats for sixty passengers each and to be unveiled next week.

(A) cars to contain enough seats for sixty passengers each and to be unveiled next week
(B) cars, containing enough seats for sixty passengers each, and are being unveiled next week
(C) cars are being unveiled next week containing enough seats for sixty passengers each
(D) cars, containing enough seats for sixty passengers each, are being unveiled next week
(E) cars are being unveiled next week, they contain enough seats for sixty passengers each

3.  Speaking at a small bookshop, Paul Auster suggested that his fans read the works of Franz Kafka.

(A) Paul Auster suggested that his fans read the works of Franz Kafka
(B) the works of Franz Kafka were what Paul Auster suggested that his fans read
(C) which grew up his fans were suggested to read the works of Franz Kafka by Paul Auster
(D) Franz Kafka's works, suggested Paul Auster, were what his fans should read
(E) read the works of Franz Kafka was the suggestion Paul Auster gave his fans

4.  Documentaries should educate viewers about a certain topic but also trying to expose relatively unpublicized stories that can spark a shift in the public concensus.

(A) also trying to expose
(B) aiming at the same time to expose
(C) should also expose
(D) with their goal to expose
(E) their goal should also be in exposing

5.  The New Zealand Maori rugby team caused a controversy in 2003 adding Christian Cullen to the team, even though he only had 1/64 Maori ancestry.

(A) controversy in 2003 adding
(B) controversy in 2003, added
(C) controversy in 2003 by adding
(D) controversy in 2003 with the adding of
(E) controversy in 2003; and added

6.  Ms. Clarkson would not allow her student to use his calculator until he can demonstrate a mastery of multiplication that was equal to her mastery of multiplication.

(A) can demonstrate a mastery of multiplication that was equal to her mastery of multiplication
(B) could demonstrate a mastery of multiplication that was equal to her own
(C) would be able to demonstrate a mastery of multiplication that was equal to her own
(D) can demonstrate a mastery of multiplication that was equal to her own
(E) could demonstrate a mastery of multiplication that was equal to her mastery of multiplication

7.  Twentieth century painter Pablo Picasso refused to speak publicly about his pacifism during times of war because he believed that with the commenting of political views they could be better accomplished through his artwork.

(A) with the commenting of political views they
(B) if you commented on political views it
(C) political views which were commented on
(D) commenting on his political views
(E) by commenting on his political views

8.  Snorkeling is both cheaper and safer than scuba diving, but beneath the surface of the water is not allowed to explore.

(A) beneath the surface of the water is not allowed to explore
(B) it does not allow you to explore beneath the surface of the water
(C) beneath the surface of the water to explore it does not allow you
(D) there is its not allowing you to explore beneath the surface of the water
(E) to explore beneath the surface of the water it does not allow you

9.  Because Mount McKinley reaches a height of more than 20,000 feet and lies very close to the jet stream, this accounts for its temperatures reaching very low extremes.

(A) jet stream, this accounts for its temperatures reaching very low extremes
(B) jet stream, this causes low temperatures
(C) jet stream, temperatures can reach very low extremes
(D) jet stream is the reason why its temperatures can reach very low extremes
(E) jet stream, it causes temperatures to reach very low extremes

10.  Until being almost completely destroyed for its timber, rainforests were plentiful in Brazil as well as many other South American countries.

(A) Until being almost completely destroyed for its
(B) Up to them being almost completely destroyed for their
(C) Before they have been almost completely destroyed for their
(D) Before having been almost completely destroyed for its
(E) Until they were almost completely destroyed for their

11.  Samantha completed her internship at USA Today last year, and since then is writing a biweekly column for them.

(A) and since then is writing a biweekly column for them
(B) and she has been writing a biweekly column for the newspaper ever since
(C) she has been writing a biweekly column for the newspaper since then
(D) when ever since she writes a biweekly column
(E) since that time she has written a biweekly column for them

12.  Performing every week at a local improvisational theater, Julie, Liz, and Amy shared a desire to form a comedy trio that would garner praise from national critics.

(A) to form a comedy trio
(B) of forming a comedy trio
(C) of forming comedy trios
(D) that they would form comedy trios
(E) to form comedy trios

13.  Many people hope that someday we will not only eliminate poverty in all Third World countries, but we will wipe out world hunger.

(A) we will not only eliminate poverty in all Third World countries, but we will wipe out world hunger
(B) we will not only eliminate poverty in all Third World countries but also wipe out world hunger
(C) we will not only eliminate poverty in all Third World countries, but we will wipe out world hunger in addition
(D) not only poverty in all Third World countries will be eliminated, but also a wiping out of world hunger will occur
(E) we will eliminate not only poverty in all Third World countries, but also a wiping out of world hunger

14.  The team is comprised of several players who, although their home countries are different, the abilities range from above average to truly extraordinary on the field.

(A) the abilities range from above average to truly extraordinary on the field
(B) the abilities on the field range from sharing above average to truly extraordinary
(C) share abilities on the field that range from above average to truly extraordinary
(D) sharing on the field in abilities ranging from above average to truly extraordinary
(E) they are sharing abilities on the field ranging from above average to truly extraordinary

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